Please, I need your opinion and feedback about my accent,pronunciation.

[Laziza]

Me reading Sonnet 116 by William Shakespeare
Here's the link to the recording:


https://clyp.it/vexhjjvl

 

[probus]

I have released this thread from moderation despite the fact that the link to vocaroo does not work for me. Perhaps it's just me and others can hear it.

 

[Laziza]

I have released this thread from moderation despite the fact that the link to vocaroo does not work for me. Perhaps it's just me and others can hear it.

It was working, I don't know what the problem is. Anyway, I'm putting another link . You can listen to the recording here:

https://clyp.it/vexhjjvl

Please, check it and let me know what you think if you've listened to it

 

[Laziza]

It doesn't work for me.

I am putting another link to the recording, please have a listen and let me know about your opinion after you've listened to it!
Here's the link to the recording:
https://clyp.it/vexhjjvl

 

[teechar]

Pretty good, but you need to work on your "ee" sound. For example, "weeks" sounds like "wicks". Also:

Shakespeare sounds like Sheks peare
rosy sounds a bit like rosé (as in the wine)
cheeks sounds a bit like a cross between chicks and checks

 

[Laziza]

Pretty good, but you need to work on your "ee" sound. For example, "weeks" sounds like "wicks". Also:

Shakespeare sounds like Sheks peare
rosy sounds a bit like rosé (as in the wine)
cheeks sounds a bit like a cross between chicks and checks

Thanks for listening and for your feedback and correction! I'll work more on my vowels