Since his teens, Tom had behaved

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Since his teens, Tom had behaved as if he were a law unto himself. He would pick fights with passers-by who gave him a stare he didn't like, and he would beat them terribly. When he needed money, he sold drugs on the streets. His career in crime ended abruptly when he tried to rob a bank, after which he was sentenced to prison for many years.
 
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I would use "for which" instead of "after which".
 
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