A beggar

[chunchuntthn]

A beggar.
Bob, a beggar, stands in front of a woman’s house. The woman talks to Bob “He is still young, you should find a job. Do you feel ashamed to beg?”. Bob replies “You say right, madam. I should find a job. You are very beautiful. You should go to Hollywood and become a actress”. The woman answerd “Right” and joyful give him food and money.

Please correct my mistakes.

[emsr2d2]

A beggar.
Bob, a beggar, stands in front of a woman’s house. The woman talks says to Bob “He is You are still young; you should find a job. Do you feel ashamed to beg?” (no full stop here) Bob replies “You say are right, madam. I should find a job. You are very beautiful. You should go to Hollywood and become an actress”. The woman answers “Right” and joyful happily gives him food and money.

Please correct my mistakes.

See above.

[chunchuntthn]

This is my rewrite.

Bob, a beggar, stands in font of a woman’s house. The woman says to Bob “You are still young; you should find a job. Do you feel ashamed to beg?” Bob replies “You are right, madam. I should find a job. You are very beautiful. You should go to Hollywood become an actress”. Th woman answers “Right” and happily gives him food and money.

[Tarheel]

Try:

Don't you feel ashamed of being a beggar?