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Your new pronunciation is much closer to a native one.
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Your pronunciation of the word has improved.
Your new pronunciation is better, but you need a dark L, not a light one in "real".
Do you know the difference between those?
Okay, so you need to listen more carefully. For example, I was telling you about the difference between a light L and a dark L.
Listen to JessicaMS's pronunciation of "luck" in the following link. That's an example of a dark L.
https://forvo.com/word/luck/#en
Listen to MissyEnglish's pronunciation of "listen" in the following link. That's an example of a light L.
https://forvo.com/word/listen/#en
Do you hear the difference?
In JessicaMS's pronunciation of "luck"the ,L sound , is so clear or strong.
In MissyEnglish's pronunciation of "listen" ,L sound , is eaten or so fast.
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