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  1. VIP Member
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    #1

    Now and then, Kevin delivers printed advertisements

    Have I made any mistakes?

    Now an then, Kevin delivers printed advertisements from door to door to supplement his pension. Sometimes he is so tired that he throws a large part of them in the nearest bin, but not before assuring himself that nobody sees him.

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    #2

    Re: Now and then, Kevin delivers printed advertisements

    Perhaps:

    Sometimes he is so tired after working for several hours ....
    Not a professional teacher

  3. Moderator
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    #3

    Re: Now and then, Kevin delivers printed advertisements

    'printed advertisements' is not wrong, but 'flyers' is better.

  4. Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    #4

    Re: Now and then, Kevin delivers printed advertisements

    How about ensuring that?

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