The band struck up a lively tune

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The band struck up a lively tune and a few couples got up from their tables and walked over the dance floor. Soon a dozen of them were swinging to the music, holding tightly onto one another as they moved across the floor.
 

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You've missed a preposition in the first sentence.
 
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walked over to the dance floor?
 
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