ragereg
New member
- Joined
- Sep 27, 2019
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- Native Language
- Tagalog
- Home Country
- Philippines
- Current Location
- Philippines
In the letter that i'm about to write i want to express to the reader that our collaboration would be a good idea in a more formal way of speaking and
as of now my current progress is:
"this collaboration would benefit us in such a way that the resulting design would be more efficient, reliable and cost effective"
I feel that the opening part of the sentence is weak and kinda casual, so instead of saying "this" i want to express it in a more subject specific way but i just can't seem
to find the perfect word in the back of my head. All i could think of is "Such collaboratory(don't even know if there's such a word) work with company B..." and i'm a lot less confident of that opening for my letter than what i stated earlier and if there are other suggestions on how to improve the rest of the sentence please do throw them at me.
as of now my current progress is:
"this collaboration would benefit us in such a way that the resulting design would be more efficient, reliable and cost effective"
I feel that the opening part of the sentence is weak and kinda casual, so instead of saying "this" i want to express it in a more subject specific way but i just can't seem
to find the perfect word in the back of my head. All i could think of is "Such collaboratory(don't even know if there's such a word) work with company B..." and i'm a lot less confident of that opening for my letter than what i stated earlier and if there are other suggestions on how to improve the rest of the sentence please do throw them at me.