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    When John died of a heart attack

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    When John died of a heart attack people said that he had worked himself to death. He would often spend about twelve hours daily in his tailor shop and even would work at weekends. For those who knew him well it was difficult to explain this manic need to work because John had almost everything a man needed: a large house with a lovely garden, two cars and a beautiful wife. After his funeral, his wife told her friends that now that her hard-working husband was dead, she was going to lead a full life, because her marriage with John felt like being kept in a gilded cage.

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    Re: When John died of a heart attack

    How about a comma after attack?

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