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  1. Kumar Nadimuthu's Avatar
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    #1

    Fun with parents and family

    Could you please correct the below sentences?


    1. My mother allocates remote for my brother and me for every alternate day as we are always fighting for our favorite channel.
    2. We used to go for Chennai-Marina beach once in a month.
    3. My brother tells fake story when we start sleeping in the night.
    4. My brother and I dig out sand whenever we go to beach.
    5. My father and I play football everyday evening at the park.
    6. My brother demands chicken fried rice from restaurant for all late evening karate classes.
    7. We eat ice cream on every Sunday afternoon.
    8. We emphasize our mother to prepare lemon rice and potato fry for our school lunch.
    9. My father usually gives costly birthday gifts for our birthday.
    10. My father took us for river boating last year.
    Please correct my mistakes.

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    #2

    Re: Fun with parents and family

    This looks as if it could be a homework assignment.
    Typoman - writer of rongs

  3. Kumar Nadimuthu's Avatar
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    #3

    Re: Fun with parents and family

    Yes, it is. This is for my son. I have prepared the above sentences, but, I am not confident on my English.
    Please correct my mistakes.

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    #4

    Re: Fun with parents and family

    Quote Originally Posted by Kumar Nadimuthu View Post
    Yes, it is. This is for my son. I have prepared the above sentences (no comma here) but (no comma here) I am not confident on in my English.
    Do you mean that your son was given this homework by his school and you have tried to help by writing the answers for him?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #5

    Re: Fun with parents and family

    Yes.
    Please correct my mistakes.

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    #6

    Re: Fun with parents and family

    Then we cannot help you. The rules of the forum clearly state that we do not help with homework or assignments.

    In my opinion, you should not be helping your son with his homework either! It is his homework. If someone else writes the answers, how will his teacher know what level his English is at, and where his strengths and weaknesses are? I understand the temptation to help with kids' homework but I believe you are doing him a disservice by helping him. He should do his homework on his own so that his teacher gets a true impression of his English.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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