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    #1

    As Bob was walking in the city

    Have I made any mistakes?

    As Bob was walking in the city he noticed that nobody was paying attention to him. He might just as well have been invisible. This was such a contrast to his little hometown where everyone knew everyone, and where he was often greeted by passers-by as soon as he came out of his home.

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    #2

    Re: As Bob was walking in the city

    Any thoughts on a comma after in the city?

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    #3

    Re: As Bob was walking in the city

    That's an interesting first line. (I would be wary if someone was paying attention to me.)

    I don't see any mistakes.
    Not a professional teacher

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