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Sanjib

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I have write a sentence for email. i want to know it is correct sentence or anything else need to added.

'Thanks to inform me. Unfortunately, next week most of the DB members will be on leave and you know after next week daylight saving will be started. Hence, we are unable to reschedule today's training season. However, I will give you this training on separate day.'
 

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I [STRIKE]have write[/STRIKE] wrote [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] the following sentences for an email. I [STRIKE]want[/STRIKE] would like to know [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] if they [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] are correct [STRIKE]sentence[/STRIKE] or if anything else needs to be added.

'Thanks [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] for informing me [of/about [subject]. Unfortunately, next week most of the DB members will be on leave and, as you know, [STRIKE]after next week[/STRIKE] daylight savings [STRIKE]will be started[/STRIKE] starts the week after next. [STRIKE]Hence[/STRIKE] Consequently, we are unable to reschedule today's training [STRIKE]season[/STRIKE] session. However, I will give you this training on [STRIKE]separate[/STRIKE] another day.'


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