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    Post kid speech for kindergarten graduation

    Could you please check if there is any grammatical errors?
    Thank you so much!


    Dear parents, principal, teachers and friends. Good evening everyone, I am ________, welcome you to our school concert and graduation ceremony 2019. First of all, I’d like to thanks dad and mum for all the love and support you have given to me. Thank you for sending me to this outstanding school. We’ve had good time in the school and learned helping each other.

    Now we are going to graduate and we feel reluctant to leave. On the occasion, I represent all of the graduating students to express our gratitude. "Dear teacher, thank you for your love and hard work to educate us. Please believe us, we will continue strive to do better for our future.

    On behalf of our school, we are very grateful for your continuous support. Wishing all of you have a pleasant night. Thank you.

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    Re: kid speech for kindergarten graduation

    Could you please check to see if there are any grammatical errors?

    Yes, there are a few.

    Thank you so much!

    Laying it on rather thickly, aren't you?
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    Re: kid speech for kindergarten graduation

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    Could you please check to see if there are any grammatical errors?

    Yes, there are a few.

    Thank you so much!

    Laying it on rather thickly, aren't you?
    Thanks for your reply. Do you have a better suggestion ?

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    Re: kid speech for kindergarten graduation

    Quote Originally Posted by yakuza View Post
    Thanks for your reply. Do you have a better suggestion?
    Yes. Don't include any kind of "Thank you" in a post asking for our help. Wait until we've helped you and then thank us by clicking on the Thank button.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: kid speech for kindergarten graduation

    dads and mums

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    Re: kid speech for kindergarten graduation

    Can I just check something? Is this really a speech to be read out by a child who is just finishing kindergarten? A child of 4 or 5 years of age?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: kid speech for kindergarten graduation

    Dear parents, principal, teachers, and friends. Good evening, everyone! I am Yakuza, and I welcome you to our concert and graduation ceremony for 2019. First of all, I'd like to thank Dad and Mum for all the support you have given me. Thank you for sending me to this outstanding school. We've had a good time and learned a lot helping each other.

    Hm. A five-year old is to give that speech? (Graduating from kindergarten to college, I guess.)
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    Re: kid speech for kindergarten graduation

    Two more sentences.

    Now we are going to graduate, and we feel reluctant to leave. On this occasion, I represent all of the graduating students to express our gratitude.
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    Re: kid speech for kindergarten graduation

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    Dear parents, principal, teachers, and friends. Good evening, everyone! I am Yakuza, and I welcome you to our concert and graduation ceremony for 2019. First of all, I'd like to thank Dad and Mum for all the support you have given me. Thank you for sending me to this outstanding school. We've had a good time and learned a lot helping each other.

    Hm. A five-year old is to give that speech? (Graduating from kindergarten to college, I guess.)
    It's a speech for six-year old kid who will be going to primary school next year. However it seems pretty common here to let kid giving a speech at this age.

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    Re: kid speech for kindergarten graduation

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Yes. Don't include any kind of "Thank you" in a post asking for our help. Wait until we've helped you and then thank us by clicking on the Thank button.
    Sorry I'm new here. Thanks for the tips.

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