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    [Article] SPA is Faith

    Hello, I'm hoping to find a native speaker to help revise this article. Someone translated from Chinese to English, and I modified upon that version.
    Still, it doesn't seem good to me at all, when you have to work after someone, it's even harder than translating the whole thing from scratch.

    Many thanks in advance!
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    SPA is Faith


    What is SPA?

    SPA is life, faith, and everything from health, nature and balance that you believe in.
    SPA exhibits itself in many ways, for example, aromatherapy, hydrotherapy, wood therapy, stone therapy, food therapy, music therapy, etc., through which we relax, reflect, and reinvigorate ourselves to become joyful in mind.


    Why do we need SPA?

    Based on relaxing the body, SPA is a healthy lifestyle obtained by receiving the medical treatment, physical treatment and beauty treatment for the body. It is a green, righteous, positive and optimistic conviction, full of truth, kindness and beauty.
    Unlike beauty or body care, SPA is intended not only for the body, but the mind, and even the soul. Only when one has a healthy body, mind and soul, and balance them to perceive the world so as to understand the meaning and goal of life, can he be more concentrated on pursuing a positive life.
    SPA includes commercial SPA, non-commercial SPA and family SPA. It is the symbol of healthy, natural and balanced life, and also the faith rich in positive energy.


    Why are we engaged in SPA industry?

    To us, it is a way to cultivate our body, mind and soul, an experience about truth, kindness and beauty, and a precious gift from life; to the society, it is a noble job that extends love and good fortune of our own self to the other people, while delivering ideas about good life and creating a beautiful future; to all human beings, it is the best way to obtain spiritual wealth and material wealth, for it starts with true love that never ends.
    We treat people approaching us with love, great care, and professional services, they become more relaxed and healthier, and this leads to a more harmonious society and civilized world.
    We believe, here in china, as long as every SPA practitioner demands themselves to maintain a high standard from a professional standpoint, the quality of our nationals will be improved as a result.
    SPA, an ordinary but great job, is more of great faith in our ordinary life.

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    Re: [Article] SPA is Faith

    Is SPA an acronym, or do are you talking about spas?

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    Re: [Article] SPA is Faith

    The latter, https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dic...fied/spa?q=SPA, thanks.
    So it/SPA should be in small case, right?
    But, in our field of work, it means more than just "a place where people go in order to become more healthy, by doing exercises, eating special food, etc."


    The term ‘spa’ encompasses a wide range of services and experiences, and can mean everything from a small facial and massage business to expansive destinations of pampering. The word spa was first used as far back as the eras of Ancient Greece and Rome to describe naturally occurring thermal springs. These locations of bathing and relaxation were believed to benefit health and wellbeing, and in this sense not much has changed to date. Spas remain havens of luxury; the only difference today is that they have changed shape and form to fall into various different categories.

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