at 60 degrees from the tee

[keannu]

[FONT=&#48148]Usually golf starts with tee shot. To make a tee shot, I set the ball on the tee. And I prepare a driver club to hit the ball. In tee shot, we set the club at 60 degrees from the tee with proper distance to foot. And then, we make a swing to hit the ball as if we were making baseball hitting.

If the underlined is wrong, please let me know.[/FONT]

 

[emsr2d2]

Usually, golf starts with a tee shot. To make a tee shot, I set the ball on the tee. [STRIKE]And[/STRIKE] Then I [STRIKE]prepare[/STRIKE] choose a driver. [STRIKE]club[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]to hit the ball.[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]In[/STRIKE] For a tee shot, we set the club at 60 degrees from the tee [STRIKE]with[/STRIKE] and at the [STRIKE]proper[/STRIKE] correct distance [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] from our foot. [STRIKE]And[/STRIKE] Then (no comma here) we [STRIKE]make a[/STRIKE] swing to hit the ball as if we were [STRIKE]making[/STRIKE] hitting a baseball. [STRIKE]hitting.[/STRIKE]

If the underlined is wrong, please let me know.

Note my corrections above. I'm not a golf fan but I think a round of golf starting when someone tees off.

 

[keannu]

Note my corrections above. I'm not a golf fan but I think a round of golf starting when someone tees off.

Thanks a lot. Would you let me know why you don't need a comma after the two "then"?

 

[Tarheel]

I am not a golfer, but I would say:

A round of golf starts with a tee shot.

I am not at all sure what the underlined part means. (I don't understand the rest of that sentence either.)
:-?

 

[Glizdka]

...In tee shot, we set the club at a 60-degrees angle from to the tee with proper distance to foot...

Not a teacher

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[STRIKE]Hello, keannu,

I think that's a wrong preposition.[/STRIKE]
[The preposition was fine. I was wrong.]

 

[emsr2d2]

"from" was fine.