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    On one of his visits to his parents

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    On one of his visits to his parents, Mark saw the first signs of his mother losing her mind. She accused his father and Mark of trying to poison her and spying on her. No matter how hard he reasoned with her, she wouldn't listen. Mark felt pity for his father who had to endure all that blather and groundless accusations and, at the same time, stay calm. He feared what was going to happen when his mother's metal state became so serious that she had to be hospitalised.

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    Re: On one of his visits to his parents

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
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    On one of his visits to his parents, Mark saw the first signs of his mother losing her mind. She accused his father and Mark of trying to poison her and of spying on her. No matter how much he reasoned with her, she wouldn't listen. Mark felt pity for his father, who had to endure all that blather and the groundless accusations and, at the same time, stay calm. He feared what was going to happen when his mother's mental state became so serious that she had to be hospitalised.
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