Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
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Kevin looked at himself in the mirror and didn't like at all what he saw: a middle-aged man who had grown old before his time. Grey hair springing from his scalp; wrinkles around his eyes; his paunch only getting bigger. His work at the TV station was slowly killing him, and he would have no use of his fame if his health was ruined. You have to find another job, he thought. Better to be nothing but healthy than famous and sick.
Kevin looked at himself in the mirror and didn't like at all what he saw: a middle-aged man who had grown old before his time. Grey hair springing from his scalp; wrinkles around his eyes; his paunch only getting bigger. His work at the TV station was slowly killing him, and he would have no use of his fame if his health was ruined. You have to find another job, he thought. Better to be nothing but healthy than famous and sick.
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