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    Grammar for describing my former job

    I plan to write the following paragraph in my resume, for describing my former job as a Software Developer.
    Note that I wrote "Y" below for not exposing the company I work (refer to "Y" as the name of the company).
    Please tell me if I have grammar mistakes here:

    July 2017 – October 2018: Software Developer, Y:

    • Development of the firmware's simulations environment.
    • Worked with Linux and Cygwin environments.
    • Created feature for providing information about the firmware’s test coverage.


    *Another question related - maybe it will look better to write the first dot like what I wrote below?

    • Develop the firmware's simulations environment.


    (Not sure if I can write "Develop" when describing a job I did in the past).

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    Re: Grammar for describing my former job

    Quote Originally Posted by Hulio943 View Post
    I plan to write the following paragraph in my resume, for describing my former job as a Software Developer.
    Note that I wrote "Y" below for not exposing the company I work (refer to "Y" as the name of the company).
    Please tell me if I have grammar mistakes here:

    July 2017 – October 2018: Software Developer, Y:

    • Development of the firmware's simulations environment.
    • Worked with Linux and Cygwin environments.
    • Created feature for providing information about the firmware’s test coverage.


    A related question. Maybe it will look better to write the bullet point like what I wrote below?

    • Developed the firmware's simulations environment.


    (Not sure if I can write "Develop" when describing a job I did in the past).
    My suggestions.
    Not a professional teacher

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