Is there anyone, please help me to write the above email

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please see the email below, which will be shared with regional heads according to the analysis of proposed prices.
Dear Regional Heads,
Please find the attached analysis of price list for 2020.
Key highlights:
Region Service income according to prices Proposed BP IDX # var Balochistan 3,024,700 2,947,019 103% 77,681 Karachi* 83,090,691 79,075,569 105% 4,015,123 Punjab** 52,088,902 52,570,732 99% (481,830) KP 29,622,058 31,730,710 93% (2,108,652) Sindh 29,298,869 38,818,568 75% (9,519,699) *excluding MCH
**excluding New Minerva and Bahawalpur
Karachi: in BP current prices were set, as prices were increased during BP working.
Punjab: Main contribution in downwards of income is Faisalabad and Rawalpindi
KP: Mainn contribution in downwards of income is Peshawar (1.1m) and DI Khan (662k)
Sindh: All centres are contributing in downwards of income.
According to the analysis Punjab, KP and Sindh needs to revise their proposed prices for 2020.
For the details please find attached price list (Proposed vs BP and Current)
Is there anyone, please help me to write the above email
Please don't chase things up after only four hours. We are all volunteers and we work to our own speed, not yours. If you need something done urgently, you will have to pay someone (I don't mean someone here).
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.
Are the regional heads paid for their work?
(The first word of each sentence should be capitalized.)
Last edited by Tarheel; 10-Jan-2020 at 15:29. Reason: Insert missing word
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You are running a business. You should be willing to pay people for their work. Surely out of the millions of people in Karachi (if that's where you are) there should be one person who can and will help you for the proper compensation.
(I don't help people with their homework, so why should I help people with their paid work?)
I'm going to contradict myself in my next post.
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Karachi,: in BP current prices were set, as prices were increased during BP working.
Prices rise, and prices fall according to market conditions. In that sentence you want either prices rose or prices went up.
Saying that prices were set implies that somebody set them.
I don't know what BP working means.
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