In pull-ups exercise we hold a bar above our head and push our body until our head ha

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In pull-ups exercise we hold a bar above our head and push our body until our head has gone past that bar.


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In pull-ups exercise we hold a bar above our head and push our body until our head has gone past that bar.

Please check my sentence.

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Tufguy, why are they called "pull ups"?
 

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Tufguy, why are they called "pull ups"?

In pull ups exercise we hold a bar above our head and pull our body until our head has gone past that bar.
 

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In pull ups exercise we hold a bar above our head and pull our body until our head has gone past that bar.
You've addressed one of the three areas ems indicated needed attention in post #2. If you don't respond with something that demonstrates that you've worked on the other two, I'm going to close this thread.
 

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You've addressed one of the three areas ems indicated needed attention in post #2. If you don't respond with something that demonstrates that you've worked on the other two, I'm going to close this thread.


In pull ups exercises we grab a overhead bar and pull our body until our head has gone past that bar.

Is it correct now?
 

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In pull ups exercises we grab a overhead bar and pull our body until our head has gone past that bar.

Is it correct now?
You were warned. Thread closed.
 
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