Belinda Stark, a famous opera singer,

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Belinda Stark, a famous opera singer, spent the last decade of her life in a self-imposed isolation. She seldom left her mansion and only occasionally received visitors. Once known for her large extravagant parties, Belinda now shunned the limelight. According to her will, her sealed letter was read at her funeral in which she accused the establishment of hypocrisy and being interested only in power and money. She called some of her female colleagues prostitutes, who succeeded thanks to their talents in bed rather than their extraordinary voice abilities. The letter was published in the leading newspapers the following day and caused consternation. Some of her fans called it fake and were dismayed by its content while people who knew Belinda well argued that the letter precisely conveyed her views and feelings.
 

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