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    bus information system,

    *Korean Bus Information System at bus stops
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    Korean bus stops have bus information system, which lets us know when buses arrive. Through the system, passengers can easily know when buses arrive, and what buses stop at a bus stop. Also the information is provided on a smart phone app, so we don’t have to wait for buses at a bus stop.


    Are the underlined correct?

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    Re: bus information system,

    Quote Originally Posted by keannu View Post
    *Korean Bus Information System at bus stops
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    Korean bus stops have a bus information system screen, which lets us passengers know when buses are due to arrive. Through the Thanks to/With this system, passengers can easily know find out/tell/see when buses will arrive, and what which buses stop at a bus particular stop. Also, the information is provided on a smartphone app, so we donít have to wait for buses for too/very long at a bus stop.
    See my suggested changes above. As in a previous thread, I have removed the underlining because I have changed other parts.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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