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    induces/guides prepayment.

    And many Korean restaurants have electrical kiosks to order foods. When a customer orders an item on the touch pad and pays it by credit card/with a credit card, it passes the order on to the kitchen automatically. It can reduce labor cost, and also induces/guides prepayment.

    Are the underlined correct?

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    Re: induces/guides prepayment.

    Quote Originally Posted by keannu View Post
    And many Korean restaurants have electrical kiosks to order foods food. When a customer orders an item on the touch pad and pays for it by credit card/with a credit card, it passes the order on to the kitchen automatically the order is passed automatically to the kitchen. It This can reduce labor costs, and also induces/guides encourage prepayment.
    Note my suggested changes above. As in a previous thread, I have removed the underlining because I have changed other parts. Just for once (in the second sentence), the passive is better than the active.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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