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    Amanda was so obsessed with her painting

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    Amanda was so obsessed with her painting that she neglected her children. When they grew up, they told her they would never forgive her how she treated them. While their playmates and friends went with their parents to cinemas, fairs, pastry shops, and on holidays, they had to sit at home because Amanda couldn't disengage from one of her "master-pieces" she polished for ever.

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    Re: Amanda was so obsessed with her painting

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    Have I made any mistakes?

    Amanda was so obsessed with her painting that she neglected her children. When they grew up, they told her they would never forgive her for how she treated them. While their playmates and friends went with their parents to cinemas, fairs, pastry shops, and on holidays, they had to sit at home because Amanda couldn't disengage from one of her "master-pieces" she polished endlessly.
    You might say Amanda couldn't disengage herself from ....
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