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    Herewego is offline Banned
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    Dear student enquiries

    Hello.
    Would anybody correct my mistakes in this email?

    Dear student enquiries team.
    My name is XX and my student number is XX. I graduated on December 2nd. I've returned to Brazil, my home country. Currently, the XX, a governmental body, is validating my certificate. They may send you an email to confirm that I obtained an Msc from the University of XX. I kindly request that you provide them with any information they require, otherwise my certificate won't be validated.

    Regards.

    XX

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    J&K Tutoring Guest

    Re: Dear student enquiries

    It all looks good to me except for that last sentence. You shouldn't have to 'convince' them to do their job. I suggest something more like:

    I hereby give my permission to release any information or records they request.

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    GoesStation is offline Moderator
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    Re: Dear student enquiries

    The degree is an MSc.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Dear student enquiries

    May I ask what kind of certificate it is and why it needs to be validated?
    Not a professional teacher

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    Herewego is offline Banned
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    Re: Dear student enquiries

    Thank you all for your responses.

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