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  1. Banned
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      • Brazil
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      • Germany

    • Join Date: Nov 2019
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    #1

    Dear student enquiries

    Hello.
    Would anybody correct my mistakes in this email?

    Dear student enquiries team.
    My name is XX and my student number is XX. I graduated on December 2nd. I've returned to Brazil, my home country. Currently, the XX, a governmental body, is validating my certificate. They may send you an email to confirm that I obtained an Msc from the University of XX. I kindly request that you provide them with any information they require, otherwise my certificate won't be validated.

    Regards.

    XX

  2. J&K Tutoring
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    #2

    Re: Dear student enquiries

    It all looks good to me except for that last sentence. You shouldn't have to 'convince' them to do their job. I suggest something more like:

    I hereby give my permission to release any information or records they request.

  3. Moderator
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    #3

    Re: Dear student enquiries

    The degree is an MSc.
    I am not a teacher.

  4. Tarheel's Avatar
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    #4

    Re: Dear student enquiries

    May I ask what kind of certificate it is and why it needs to be validated?
    Not a professional teacher

  5. Banned
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    #5

    Re: Dear student enquiries

    Thank you all for your responses.

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