Sneymarin
Member
- Joined
- Sep 26, 2019
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Moldavian
- Home Country
- Moldova
- Current Location
- Italy
Hello, I would like some help with punctuating the last sentence in this short dialogue:
COLE
You got the key! Did you say hello to the aliens down there?
WILLA
Yeah, I greeted the heck out of them! A heads up would have been nice Cole.
COLE
I like to surprise my friends.
WILLA
We are n...(deep breath) I like surprises Cole, just not the "life threatening" kind. I have to keep going, you know... to save you all.
I want to indicate an interruption with "We are n...". Willa stops mid word because she doesn't want to be mean. I was thinking of using an em dash but I'm not too sure.
Thank you for your time.
COLE
You got the key! Did you say hello to the aliens down there?
WILLA
Yeah, I greeted the heck out of them! A heads up would have been nice Cole.
COLE
I like to surprise my friends.
WILLA
We are n...(deep breath) I like surprises Cole, just not the "life threatening" kind. I have to keep going, you know... to save you all.
I want to indicate an interruption with "We are n...". Willa stops mid word because she doesn't want to be mean. I was thinking of using an em dash but I'm not too sure.
Thank you for your time.
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