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    Alan suffered a lot from tonsillitis

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    Alan suffered a lot from tonsillitis as a child. Doctors advised his parents to take his tonsils out, but they were against. "Tonsils are like the doors to a house. If you remove them, you'll home will be unprotected," his father said. Later, when Alan grew up, he never suffered from tonsillitis again, and he was grateful to his parents for their wisdom.

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    Re: Alan suffered a lot from tonsillitis

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    Alan suffered a lot from tonsillitis as a child. Doctors advised his parents to take his tonsils out, but they were against. "Tonsils are like the doors to a house. If you remove them, you'll home will be unprotected," his father said.
    Fix those two.

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    Re: Alan suffered a lot from tonsillitis

    Would it be OK if I say this?

    "but they were against that."

    "your home will be unprotected."

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