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    ...redesigned the entrances...

    Hi everyone, are there any mistakes or repetitions in this piece of writing? I'm grateful for any contribution.

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    Rui continued his research into nanobots of various types such as the biological and the electromechanical; he also considered integrating the two types, because he didn’t want to omit any possibilities. He also found, that at the nano level and below there was a totally new science needed to describe what was happening; nothing seemed to follow the same rules as in the macro world we inhabited. Many years went by, and a war with the barbarians from the southwest had become immanent, talk of abandoning the city and dispersing themselves amongst the people to the east grew out of a desire to remain peaceful. So Rui gathered supplies for his research at a much faster rate, he could not escape the city without a body. Realising that Rui would probably not be able to create a body for himself in time for the evacuation Yang helped redesign the entrances to the lower floors so that none could enter or even find them without Rui's permission.
    Last edited by rodgers white; 17-Feb-2020 at 14:43.
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