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  1. keannu's Avatar
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    #1

    "Rocket Delivery” service

    Topic : Everyone uses the Internet these days. Where and when do you use it?
    What do you mainly use the Internet for?


    We have pretty much developed smart phones. They are really developed. The Internet on mobile phones has also developed.
    I normally use the internet on my smart phone for online shopping. It’s because we are a double income family/Both I and my wife work. So I don't have enough time to go to grocery stores and or go shopping in person.

    Nowadays, online shopping provides us with such a quick service with which we can place an order at night and get the goods the next morning. Some online shopping mall called Coupang provides the fastest delivery service, so-called “Rocket Delivery” service – they guarantee the arrival/receipt of items the next morning.

    So I usually use the internet in the bed at night. When I do that, first I decide what to buy, click on the button to place an order, fall asleep and the next morning I find the goods arrived. This is the main way I use the internet.

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  2. Tarheel's Avatar
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    #2

    Re: "Rocket Delivery” service

    I don't understand the first sentence. Perhaps:

    Originally, mobile phones could only make phone calls, but since then they have developed into what they are now.
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    #3

    Re: "Rocket Delivery” service

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    I normally access the internet with my cellphone. Because both my wife and I work we don't have time to go to the store and shop in person.
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    #4

    Re: "Rocket Delivery” service

    Say:

    An online shopping mall called Coupang provides the fastest delivery service ("Rocket Delivery"). They guarantee the arrival of items the morning after you order them.

    I order something online then go to bed. After I wake up it has arrived.
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    #5

    Re: "Rocket Delivery” service

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    After When I wake up, it has arrived.
    That matches what the OP said in post #1. It doesn't arrive after he/she wakes up.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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