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    #1

    How to Upload Your Family Vacation Photos to the Internet

    If this title of a writing is too long doesn't catch a reader's interest, would the correction be a good one?

    How to Upload Your Family Vacation Photos to the Internet
    => How to Upload Family Vacation Photos Online

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    Re: How to Upload Your Family Vacation Photos to the Internet

    Isn't it true that if we upload something we upload it to a specific website (not the internet)?
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    Re: How to Upload Your Family Vacation Photos to the Internet

    Your second is certainly more succinct. I'd remove "online". I think we all know that if you upload something, you're talking about doing so online/on the internet.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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