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    Red face Sometimes I feel hesitant to kill a mosquito

    Please correct any grammatical mistakes.

    Sometimes I feel hesitant to kill a mosquito. There are no such insects which love human being so much. If you feel lonely it will remove your loneliness by informing you to its buzzing sound.This sound is really annoying when it is close to someone's ears while he or she is sleeping. It drives us mad when it breaks our sleep. At that moment we try to kill it with anything close to our hands. After killing it we feel relaxed and get courage to sleep again. Some mosquitoes' bites are as painful as putting an injection. But at the end of the day we can say that they are our relatives because they carry our blood. It's also a main cause that prevents me from killing it. By the way they aren't sparing me right now, although I haven't written any derogatory remarks against them.
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    Re: Sometimes I feel hesitant to kill a mosquito

    Dukul12345, I have changed your thread title. I have had to do this on several of your threads. Things like "Correct my grammatical mistakes" and "modal verbs" are useless as titles. Titles must include some/all of the actual words/phrases that you are asking us about. Your actual question or request must appear in the main body of your post, not in the title.

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    Re: Sometimes I feel hesitant to kill a mosquito

    Dukul12345, I noticed that you started a new thread with the same title and the same text! That is not what you were asked to do. I asked you to respond in this thread to indicate that you had read the advice. Once you write and post that response, we will look at the text in post 1 of this thread.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Sometimes I feel hesitant to kill a mosquito

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Dukul12345, I noticed that you started a new thread with the same title and the same text! That is not what you were asked to do. I asked you to respond in this thread to indicate that you had read the advice. Once you write and post that response, we will look at the text in post 1 of this thread.
    Sorry for my mistakes. I have read your advice and next time I won't do it I swear.

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    Re: Sometimes I feel hesitant to kill a mosquito

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    Dukul12345, I noticed that you started a new thread with the same title and the same text! That is not what you were asked to do. I asked you to respond in this thread to indicate that you had read the advice. Once you write and post that response, we will look at the text in post 1 of this thread.
    Pease check my new post. I had read and tried to post like your advising.

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    Re: Sometimes I feel hesitant to kill a mosquito

    There are no such insects which love human being so much.
    There is no other insect that loves human beings so much.

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    Re: Sometimes I feel hesitant to kill a mosquito

    I don't think mosquitoes like us. They just like our blood.
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    Re: Sometimes I feel hesitant to kill a mosquito

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    I don't think mosquitoes like us. They just like our blood.
    I know that. I just used that as a metaphorical.

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    Re: Sometimes I feel hesitant to kill a mosquito

    I believe I was trying for humor but missed the mark. Oh well.
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    Re: Sometimes I feel hesitant to kill a mosquito

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    I believe I was trying for humor but missed the mark. Oh well.
    It was my fault for not to be making you laugh because I'm not expert in English like you.I am trying my best to go that level by taking help from this group.Hope all of you will help me to reach that level.
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