My favorite singer is BTS

[keannu]

Topic : My favorite singer

My favorite singer is BTS. They come from Korea.
They make many kinds of music, for example, dancing, hip hop, etc.
My favorite song of theirs is “On”. I like them because their songs are addictive and easy to sing along to.
BTS is an awesome boy group.

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If I have made any mistakes, please correct them, especially the underlined parts.
For a group singers, do you say "BTS is 'a group singer' or 'a music group'"?

 

[Glizdka]

Not a teacher
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Hi, keannu!

Maybe I can help you a bit.

My favorite singer is BTS.

BTS is more than one person. You can't call BTS a singer.

They make many kinds of music, for example, dancing, hip hop, etc.

I don't know if dancing is a music genre ("kind of music"). You've used it next to hip hop, which is a music genre, so I think you need a different word (dico, pop?).

BTS is an awesome boy group.

How about boyband?

For a group singers, do you say "BTS is 'a group singer' or 'a music group'"?

Simply call it a band. "Group singer" is incorrect; singer is modified by group, so it's a person who doesn't sing alone, but with other people. I believe that's not what you meant.