Letter of Motivation for Bachelor Program in the Netherlands

[tim0818]

Hello I am international student.
Now I am applying for the Netherlands University
so can you guys help me for correcting the motivation letter?( grammar, contents, structure)

Here is my Motivation Letter:

Dear Sir and Madam
I am writing to express my interest in the Economics and Business Economics program in the Department of Economics and Business at University of Amsterdam in this summer.

First, after I had a good time in US for 1 year, I think that it is important to study various perspectives in multicultural environment rather than keep learning in uniformed base. Thus, after graduated from high school, I decided to do A-level for my secondary school to go University abroad.

In high school, I was just one of the normal students who were well enrolled in the group and followed well on school rules. However, in 2^nd year of school, I found myself changing in many ways while taking charge of the operation as the leader of the Book Club. I prepared the annual events with other schoolsÂ’ book club, had an interview with freshmen to elect new members, prepared for schoolÂ’s festival, and planned for clubÂ’s budget. Through those activities, I realized that I never had a small capacity and ability as a leader. And, I have a goal to be a leader who manages big business in the future.

During my A-level studies, I studied both business and economics, I struggled with two subjects because it was the first time I learned this subjects in different style, but when I started to compare real case and concepts, now I can see connections between real world and theories. Opening my eyes to management and economy, I chose this program to learn both subjects at the same time because I wanted to learn more about the relationship between each countryÂ’s economy and big companies, not just a theory. In addition, I want to hear how foreign students think about other countries economy and share what I think about their countryÂ’s situation. This will wide my view and help me to get closer to work in multicultural environment in the future.

Thank you for your consideration

Sincerely,