I'll take care of the scary nigh

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~~I'll take care of the scary night~~
Color Mood Lamp with a variety of colors from rainbow colors to single colors

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This lamp is for children. If any expressions are awkward, please correct them.
 

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"I'll take care of you during the scary night" would be much better.

"Color/colors" is repeated four times in your second sentence. I'm sure you can do something about that yourself.
 

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"I'll take care of you during the scary night" would be much better.

"Color/colors" is repeated four times in your second sentence. I'm sure you can do something about that yourself.

What about this? "changing color" means that though the basic color is white, when impact is applied, its color changes from rainbow ones to monotone ones.

A mood lamp with a variety of changing colors from rainbow ones to single/monotone ones.
 

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Hmm, if you have to hit it to make it change colour, I wouldn't say it has changing colours. That sounds as if it does that all the time.
 

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Hmm, if you have to hit it to make it change colour, I wouldn't say it has changing colours. That sounds as if it does that all the time.

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The attached is another picture to describe the color change. So in the following, the change could be expressed as briefly as possible, I guess.

A mood lamp with a variety of changing colors with impact from rainbow ones to single/monotone ones.
 
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