People now in this era think

[Dukul12345]

Please correct my mistakes----

People now in this era think that being an atheist is a symbol of smartness. This guy is an absolute example of it. You need logic to prove that there is a creator cos you're an atheist but after giving you that logic or proof you aren't convinced coz it will decrease your smartness.

 

[Raymott]

Re: 𝐏𝐞𝐨𝐩𝐥𝐞 𝐧𝐨𝐰 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐞𝐫𝐚 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐤

People these days think that being an atheist is a symbol of smartness.* This guy is an example. You need logic to prove that there is a creator because you're an atheist but after giving that logic or proof you aren't convinced because it will decrease your smartness.

*Do they?
'coz' is not a word in English.
"This guy is an example" doesn't seem to refer to anyone.
I don't understand your uses of "you". Is it the same 'you' who is not convinced after given his own proof.
The argument doesn't really work.
Maybe you could clarify your meaning?

 

[Dukul12345]

Re: 𝐏𝐞𝐨𝐩𝐥𝐞 𝐧𝐨𝐰 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐞𝐫𝐚 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐤

Maybe you could clarify your meaning?

I was just saying about an athiest guy who was not convinced after a preacher gave him some logic to prove the existence of God.I used "you" to refer that athiest guy.

 

[emsr2d2]

Re: 𝐏𝐞𝐨𝐩𝐥𝐞 𝐧𝐨𝐰 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐞𝐫𝐚 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐤

Did you write the original piece yourself?

 

[Dukul12345]

Re: 𝐏𝐞𝐨𝐩𝐥𝐞 𝐧𝐨𝐰 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐞𝐫𝐚 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐤

Did you write the original piece yourself?

Yes. I just try to write something in English though I am not expert in it.

 

[emsr2d2]

Re: 𝐏𝐞𝐨𝐩𝐥𝐞 𝐧𝐨𝐰 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐞𝐫𝐚 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐤

Yes. I just try to write something in English though I am not expert in it.

Please stop reminding us that you are not "an expert at English". We get it. You're a learner. We know that. But you must learn to tell us in post #1 if you are quoting someone else's words or your own. Please remember to start with either:

1. Please correct any mistakes in my writing below.
2. Please correct any mistakes in the writing below. It is from [title of book] by [name of author].

 

[emsr2d2]

Please correct my mistakes.

[STRIKE]People now in this era[/STRIKE] These days, people think that being an atheist is a symbol of [STRIKE]smartness[/STRIKE] intelligence.

This guy is [STRIKE]an absolute[/STRIKE] a perfect example of [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] this/that.

You need logic to prove that there is a creator [STRIKE]cos[/STRIKE] because you're an atheist but, after [STRIKE]giving you[/STRIKE] being given that logic or proof, you [STRIKE]aren't[/STRIKE] are still not convinced [STRIKE]coz[/STRIKE] because it will [STRIKE]decrease your smartness[/STRIKE] make you seem less intelligent.

See above. I've made it all grammatically correct. I don't agree with a single word of it but that's irrelevant, I suppose. You might want to be careful who you say/write this to.

 

[Dukul12345]

Re: 𝐏𝐞𝐨𝐩𝐥𝐞 𝐧𝐨𝐰 𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐞𝐫𝐚 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐤

Please stop reminding us that you are not "an expert at English". We get it. You're a learner. We know that. But you must learn to tell us in post #1 if you are quoting someone else's words or your own. Please remember to start with either:

1. Please correct any mistakes in my writing below.
2. Please correct any mistakes in the writing below. It is from [title of book] by [name of author].

Okay. I will certainly follow your advice next time.