If you can't afford them something to eat you have no right to punish them like this

[Dukul12345]

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If you can't afford them something to eat you have no right to punish them like this. It seemed to her as a defying of law but before enforcing law she should have had to put herself in their shoes because they were knowingly risking their lives to earn their daily bread.

 

[Yankee]

Please correct any mistakes in my writing below


If you can't afford them something to eat, you have no right to punish them like this. It seemed to her as [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] defying [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] the law. But before enforcing, law she should have had to put herself in their shoes, because they were knowingly risking their lives to earn their daily bread.

My shot.

 

[emsr2d2]

I think you've misplaced the comma that you've put between "enforcing" and "law".

 

[Yankee]

I think you've misplaced the comma that you've put between "enforcing" and "law".

Yes, thanks. And I should have scratched/deleted "a" before "defying".