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  1. Newbie
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    #1

    Exclamation The advantage and disadvantage of mobile phones. please correct it

    In our world, the best communication tools are mobile phones. We always use them in making calls, chating, playing games and others. They also include a lot of information to use. All of these are the advantages. But also they have disadvantages. They makes you spend a lot of time using them and this is harmful to our eyes and brain. Besides, they isolate the individual from his family. They destroy our health. Finally, I hope to take my advice seriously that you should spend enough time with your family better than using or playing on your mobile.

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    Re: The advantage and disadvantage of mobile phones. please correct it

    Welcome to the forum.

    What is the purpose of your piece of writing? Were you given it by your English teacher/tutor as an exercise?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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