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    Lightbulb If you can't afford them something to eat you have no right to punish them like this

    Please correct any mistakes in my writing below


    If you can't afford them something to eat you have no right to punish them like this. It seemed to her as a defying of law but before enforcing law she should have had to put herself in their shoes because they were knowingly risking their lives to earn their daily bread.

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    Re: If you can't afford them something to eat you have no right to punish them like t

    Quote Originally Posted by Dukul12345 View Post
    Please correct any mistakes in my writing below


    If you can't afford them something to eat, you have no right to punish them like this. It seemed to her as a defying of the law. But before enforcing, law she should have had to put herself in their shoes, because they were knowingly risking their lives to earn their daily bread.
    My shot.

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    Re: If you can't afford them something to eat you have no right to punish them like t

    I think you've misplaced the comma that you've put between "enforcing" and "law".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: If you can't afford them something to eat you have no right to punish them like t

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    I think you've misplaced the comma that you've put between "enforcing" and "law".
    Yes, thanks. And I should have scratched/deleted "a" before "defying".

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