The advantage and disadvantage of mobile phones. please correct it

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Yehia 2006

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In our world, the best communication tools are mobile phones. We always use them in making calls, chating, playing games and others. They also include a lot of information to use. All of these are the advantages. But also they have disadvantages. They makes you spend a lot of time using them and this is harmful to our eyes and brain. Besides, they isolate the individual from his family. They destroy our health. Finally, I hope to take my advice seriously that you should spend enough time with your family better than using or playing on your mobile.
 

emsr2d2

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Welcome to the forum. :hi:

What is the purpose of your piece of writing? Were you given it by your English teacher/tutor as an exercise?
 
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