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    #1

    Question business letter.

    If you find any mistakes, can you correct them for me? Thanks in advance.

    1.Thanks for your e-mail and clarification.

    2.I believe the only outstanding action is the finalisation of the Delivery Schedule (Annex A) which should happen tomorrow, after which I shall arrange for the Amendment, as attached in your e-mail below, to be signed and sent to you asap.

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    #2

    Re: business letter.

    Looks OK to me

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    #3

    Re: business letter.

    Quote Originally Posted by bosun View Post
    If you find any mistakes, can you correct them for me? Thanks in advance.

    1.Thanks for your e-mail and clarification.

    2.I believe the only outstanding action is the finalisation of the Delivery Schedule (Annex A) which should happen tomorrow, after which I shall arrange for the Amendment, as attached in your e-mail below, to be signed and sent to you asap.
    The language seems to be too formal for the "asap" ending. I would spell out the abbreviation.

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    #4

    Re: business letter.

    How about 'without delay'?

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