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    Lightbulb "A CATASTROPHIC PANDEMIC"

    Nature is boundless, nobody can regret
    the natural blunder due to badness we
    made, we revise our devout verses, when
    the world stuck in any disaster. Likewise
    pandemics are occuring in ages, having a
    full time period till cure, these catastrophe
    are bound box until our effective habits
    diverse to wrong direction. Similarly one
    harmful disease not only kills animality,
    but also economy and push the world in
    the ditch of sorrows and difficulties, we
    call it:
    "A CATASTROPHIC PANDEMIC".

    Foremost of 2020 a new virus was
    reported called as: "CORONA VIRUS"
    caused by severe accute respiratory
    syndrome corona virus 2 ( SARS-COV2).
    The first case was coded on Dec, 2019 in
    Wuhan, China later it accelerated about
    200 countries in the world. Nowadays
    doctors and scientists told the symptoms
    of virus like tiredness, fever, cough and
    breathing problems could be the purpose
    of virus. It is spreading from human transformation relating touching to the
    vapours of unwell person. World Health
    Organization awoke on 11 March 2020
    and declared it as "PANDEMIC".

    Prevention is better than cure, we must
    wash our hands time by time with any
    soap or hand washer and use the
    sanitizer, but also intake the vitamin C as
    much as possible. Relevantly without
    cleanliness we are porous, safety is to get
    good immune system, which works to
    survive from virus. People are in hysteria,
    and are not contributing to government
    orders. They must keep calm and stay
    home as per orders because scientists of
    world are making vaccine and sacrificing
    their hours of life to protect the world.

    The God is reminding us our limits,
    significance of humanity and justifies that
    He is only the everlasting creator of this
    universe (ALLAH). Denoting us the path of
    Mankind, Love and Peace which every
    religion lead. People in every country must
    stand side by side to make the world
    decent again! A world with peace and
    harmony, a world with sign of liberty, a
    world without terror skies, a beautiful world, colorful world.

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    Re: "A CATASTROPHIC PANDEMIC"

    People in every country must stand side by side ....

    Well, there goes social distancing.
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    Re: "A CATASTROPHIC PANDEMIC"

    I can't help but wonder
    What you mean by natural blunder.
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    Re: "A CATASTROPHIC PANDEMIC"

    Quote Originally Posted by Junaid View Post
    Nature is boundless, nobody can regret the natural blunder due to badness we made, we revise our devout verses, when the world stuck in any disaster. Likewise (missing punctuation) pandemics are occuring in ages, having a full time period till cure, these catastrophe are bound box until our effective habits diverse to wrong direction. Similarly (missing punctuation) one harmful disease not only kills animality, but also (missing article) economy and push the world in the ditch of sorrows and difficulties, we call it: "A CATASTROPHIC PANDEMIC".
    I'm really not sure where to start. There are, unfortunately, so many errors in your piece (and what you're trying to say is so unclear) that it's almost impossible to correct. I have taken just the first paragraph, laid it out properly, marked punctuation errors in red and underlined all the words that are incorrect or unclear.

    I suspect you might have used something like Google Translate - if that's what you did, you will have now learned that it produces nonsense the longer the piece. If you didn't use an online translation tool, then you are simply trying to write English of a much higher level than you are capable of.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: "A CATASTROPHIC PANDEMIC"

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    I'm really not sure where to start. There are, unfortunately, so many errors in your piece (and what you're trying to say is so unclear) that it's almost impossible to correct. I have taken just the first paragraph, laid it out properly, marked punctuation errors in red and underlined all the words that are incorrect or unclear.

    I suspect you might have used something like Google Translate - if that's what you did, you will have now learned that it produces nonsense the longer the piece. If you didn't use an online translation tool, then you are simply trying to write English of a much higher level than you are capable of.
    I think it semms few punctuation mistakes only and I have rewised it myself.... so it doesn't mean that my whole pieece is incomplete.
    And I write these type of articles by using all tenses randomly, it is just my style of writing.

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    Re: "A CATASTROPHIC PANDEMIC"

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    I can't help but wonder
    What you mean by natural blunder.
    Natural disastor like land sliding etc....

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    Re: "A CATASTROPHIC PANDEMIC"

    Quote Originally Posted by Junaid View Post
    Natural disaster like a landslide sliding etc....
    Nature does not make blunders; people do.
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    Re: "A CATASTROPHIC PANDEMIC"

    Quote Originally Posted by Junaid View Post
    I think It semms seems I made only a few punctuation mistakes only and I have rewised revised it myself, so it doesn't mean that my whole pieece piece is incomplete.

    I have no idea what you mean by "I have revised it myself".
    I didn't suggest your piece was incomplete. I said it contained a lot of errors.


    And I write these type of articles by using all tenses randomly; it is just my style of writing.
    The tenses are the least of your problems.
    Please note my corrections (in red) and comments (in blue) above.

    There were eight punctuation errors - that's quite a lot in a short paragraph. However, all the underlined parts have errors and those errors aren't all to do with tenses. Your piece is, unfortunately, incomprehensible. I stand by what I said - I think you are trying to write English of a level you're not yet capable of.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: "A CATASTROPHIC PANDEMIC"

    What do you mean by "using tenses randomly"?
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    Re: "A CATASTROPHIC PANDEMIC"

    I rather like the part about the world sliding into a ditch of sorrows.

    Creativity can be good if it's effective. But if you invent words and phrases and nobody can understand what you're saying that's another story.
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