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    EMAIL TO UNIVERSITY FOR PhD ADMISSION

    Respected sir,

    I am [personal info removed] from Jammu & Kashmir. I have done M.C.A from the University of Kashmir with 79%. My major was (Artificial Intelligence, Software Engineering, Advanced Computer Graphics, Java Programming). I am writing this for admission to Ph.D. studies as I am satisfying one of the criteria to directly appear for the interview. I am solely interested in doing a Ph.D. in "Medical Image Analysis" using Artificial Intelligence and I am anxious to apply for it in your remarkablerenowned university.


    Regards,
    [Personal info removed]



    Please help me in writing more formal and impressive email.
    Last edited by INAYAT; 21-Apr-2020 at 05:32. Reason: Removed personal information

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    Re: EMAIL TO UNIVERSITY FOR PhD ADMISSION

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    Re: EMAIL TO UNIVERSITY FOR PhD ADMISSION

    Quote Originally Posted by INAYAT View Post
    Please help me in writing to write a more formal and impressive email.


    RespectedDearSir,

    I am [your full name] from Jammu & Kashmir. Is this an area of your country or the name of a company?

    have done
    completed an/my M.C.A from at the University of Kashmir with 79% (79% what?).

    My major was
    I majored in no bracket here Artificial Intelligence, Software Engineering, Advanced Computer Graphics, and Java Programming no bracket here.

    I am writing this
    to apply for admission to your Ph.D. studies course as I am satisfying satisfy one of the your criteria to directly appear for the an interview.

    I am solely interested in doing a Ph.D. in "Medical Image Analysis" using Artificial Intelligence and I am anxious
    eager to apply for it in gain a place at your remarkable/ renowned university.

    RegardsYours faithfully,

    [Personal info removed]
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