blackyman7
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- Joined
- Apr 22, 2020
- Member Type
- Teacher (Other)
- Native Language
- English
- Home Country
- United States
- Current Location
- United States
[FONT="]I had to come up with a thesis statement for my argumentive essay outline and after that I had to film a video for that class. Now I did everything correctly EXCEPT my thesis statement, long story short I never saw my teachers feedback and filmed the video. I now have the chance to redeem myself and really need the credits for this class desperately. Can anybody please help me with bettering my thesis statement? it can't be longer than 1-2 sentences.[/FONT]
[FONT="]''Evidence has shown that gender-segregated schools are not inherently better than co-ed schools.''[/FONT]
[FONT="]As you can see my ''thesis statement'' is more a fact. How can I improve this to become a solid thesis statement??[/FONT]
[FONT="]Any help will be appreciated![/FONT]
[FONT="]''Evidence has shown that gender-segregated schools are not inherently better than co-ed schools.''[/FONT]
[FONT="]As you can see my ''thesis statement'' is more a fact. How can I improve this to become a solid thesis statement??[/FONT]
[FONT="]Any help will be appreciated![/FONT]