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    Lightbulb Farida Begum, travelling from Khilgaon to Bangshal on foot, fainted of exhaustion.

    Please correct my mistakes in my writing.


    Farida Begum, travelling from Khilgaon to Bangshal on foot, fainted of exhaustion. Hearing that she might be able to procure relief food items from the area, she had made her journey. She did get some half a kilo rice but ended up losing her consciousness due to the heat and worries about the lack of food for her family.

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    Re: Farida Begum, travelling from Khilgaon to Bangshal on foot, fainted of exhaustion

    Quote Originally Posted by Dukul12345 View Post
    Please correct my mistakes in my writing.


    Farida Begum, travelling from Khilgaon to Bangshal on foot, fainted of exhaustion. Hearing Having heard that she might be able to procure relief food items from the area, she had made her the journey. She did get some [about] half a kilo rice but ended up losing her consciousness due to the heat and worries concerns about the lack of food for her family.
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