[Grammar] Is this grammatically correct? please help

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kasun

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I still remember in the small days when I was a kid I wanted to be a successful business person. So here I am today, achieving my childhood dream day by day. This is just the 1st step and more to go. And also I'm happy to say that I get all the support from the heaven.
 

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I still remember in the[STRIKE] small [/STRIKE] early days when I was a kid, I wanted to be a successful business person. So here I am today, achieving my childhood dream day by day. This is just the 1st step and (or "with") more to go. And also, I'm happy to say that I get all the support from [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] heaven.

Minor changes.
 

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1st should be written first.
"..and there is more to go".
 

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Achieving my dreams

Perhaps:

I still remember when I was a child and I dreamed of becoming a successful businessperson.
 

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Re: Achieving my dreams

Welcome to the forum, kasun.

What's your objection to calling yourself 'a successful businessman/businesswoman'?
 
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