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    #1

    Lightbulb An online learning platform had organized a free online English course.

    Please correct any mistakes in my writing :

    An online learning platform had organized a free online English course. I thought this time I could fulfill my dream of learning English. So, I sent them an email requesting to get the chance . However, in replying an email they told me that the free online English course is closed now because they have already enlisted the students and also said that I should have sent that email earlier. Having seen it I was so upset that I thought my dream just got ruined.

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    #2

    Re: An online learning platform had organized a free online English course.

    Quote Originally Posted by Ador View Post
    Please correct any mistakes in my writing:

    An online learning platform had organized a free online English course.

    I thought "This time I could fulfill my dream of learning English" no full stop here so no comma here I sent them an email requesting the chance asking/applying to take part/join.

    However, in replying an they replied email they told telling me that the free online English course is was now closed now because they have had already enlisted enrolled/accepted the enough students.

    and They also said that I should have sent that email earlier.

    Having seen When I saw/read it, I was so very upset that because I thought my dream just got had been ruined.
    See my corrections above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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