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      • Egypt
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    • Join Date: May 2020
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    #1

    Paraphrase a birthday message

    Hello,

    I know my english is bad so first of all I'm sorry.

    I have a friend who will celebrate his birthday tomorrow, I can't visit him or gift him something due to quarantine so I've made him a photo gallery on some video editors and I wanted to attach a message with the photo gallery

    I just need any help in paraphrase this message in a good and strong english


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    Since the fact that we can not meet these days, and I am not being able to celebrate your birthday or gift you something though I’ve committed to say it in a special way.

    I’ve been digging over your pictures and trying my best for days just to make sure that it’ll be awesome and special just like you

    eventually hope you like it and happy birthday ;)

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    thank you.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 06-May-2020 at 21:43. Reason: Put whole post in default font and size

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    #2

    Re: Paraphrase a birthday message

    Welcome to the forum.

    The first thing I am going to ask you to do is use the "Edit Post" function to edit your post so that it follows these rules:

    1. Every sentence must start with a capital letter.
    2. Every sentence must end with one appropriate punctuation mark.
    3. Every proper noun must start with a capital letter. (Here is a hint: the names of languages always start with a capital letter in English.)
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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