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    fashion_lover is offline Newbie
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    Short personal statement

    Hello dear UsingEnglish friends!

    I'm writing a short personal statement for my CV that I need to send attached to my application for University. I'd really appreciate if someone could kindly review it and check my mistakes

    '' I am a multilingual fashion and art enthusiast seeking to embark on a new career path through the integration of design, management and current academic pursuits ''
    Last edited by fashion_lover; 09-May-2020 at 11:44.

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    Re: Short personal statement

    Why can't I edit this post aymore?

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    Re: Short personal statement

    You have only 24 hours to edit a post after you first write it. You could have edited it until 23:31 on 9th May (the timestamp here in the UK was 23:31 on 8th May - the time where you are might show up differently).

    If you want to change it, please start a new thread and I will close this one.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Short personal statement

    Thank you for your help, I will start a new threat.
    Moreover, can you please delete this post?
    https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/t...and-Management
    I have made a huge mistake by posting a very personal motivation letter

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    Re: Short personal statement

    I will delete that thread because, and only because, it has not had any responses yet. I will now close this thread.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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