Short personal statement

[fashion_lover]

Hello dear UsingEnglish friends!

I'm writing a short personal statement for my CV that I need to send attached to my application for University. I'd really appreciate if someone could kindly review it and check my mistakes

'' I am a multilingual fashion and art enthusiast seeking to embark on a new career path through the integration of design, management and current academic pursuits ''

[fashion_lover]

Why can't I edit this post aymore?

[emsr2d2]

You have only 24 hours to edit a post after you first write it. You could have edited it until 23:31 on 9th May (the timestamp here in the UK was 23:31 on 8th May - the time where you are might show up differently).

If you want to change it, please start a new thread and I will close this one.

[fashion_lover]

Thank you for your help, I will start a new threat.
Moreover, can you please delete this post?
https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/t...and-Management
I have made a huge mistake by posting a very personal motivation letter

[emsr2d2]

I will delete that thread because, and only because, it has not had any responses yet. I will now close this thread.