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    #11

    Re: When Mark entered

    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
    That's much better than the original.
    Yeah, but not poetic or expressive enough. Sounds plain and ordinary to me.
    Last edited by Captain; 22-May-2020 at 22:11. Reason: Changing emoticon

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    #12

    Re: When Mark entered

    OK, but you don't want to put too much in one sentence. If you ask a sentence to do too much it will be like a stubborn mule and just quit on you.
    Not a professional teacher

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    #13

    Re: When Mark entered

    Haha I like that simile.

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